I really enjoyed Carrie’s story, “Watched.” It was intense and held my attention. I thought at times her sentence structure could have been more precise, but the suspense was affective.
Carrie’s photographs were well placed in most cases. She obviously wasn’t working with professional actors/actresses, so some of the facial expressions weren’t compatible with the emotion of the words, but overall the completed project flowed well.
Carrie's story was compelling, easy to read and enjoyable.
Brie’s story, “Home Alone,” ironically had a similar story line to Carrie’s. I was pleasantly surprised with the outcome of the story and the twist at the end was a perfect finale.
I thought the use of her pictures was very affective and she was able to capture photos that truly related to the story line.
The title, “Home Alone,” made me think the story was going to be predictable, but Brie did a great job holding my attention and I really enjoyed the read.
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